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Integrating influenza antigenic dynamics with molecular evolution
http://bedford.io/papers/bedford-flux/
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Wording redundancy #43

Closed trvrb closed 10 years ago

trvrb commented 10 years ago

On page 9, the two consecutive sentences beginning "Previous work using..." and "Models of influenza evolution..." seem slightly redundant. If they are indeed redundant that could be fixed -- if they in fact mean different things, that could be clarified.

trvrb commented 10 years ago

We've clarified that the first sentence is referring to general not-necessarily-influenza epidemiological models and the second sentence is referring to influenza-specific models.