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Typography #4

Open apreist14 opened 10 years ago

apreist14 commented 10 years ago

The type seems to be working well with the layout. There could be some more color added to give a visual interest. The center headings aren't working the best with the layout. I think that they should be left aligned

There should also be a max width put in so that the text isn't filling the whole page that gives the long lines.

luckydesignlady commented 10 years ago

Yes, what Ashley said. The center-justified type mixed with left-justified type really throws things off for me. :palm_tree:

cvodehnal commented 10 years ago

paragraph lines are WAYYYYYY too long:) put a max-width value

apreist14 commented 10 years ago

There are some em dashes that need to be changed to en dashes

&ndash

cvodehnal commented 10 years ago

remember your webfont!

elladurham commented 10 years ago

I agree with most of the comments here, however, it's pretty clear this is in the earlier stages of development. This all looks pretty default and out-of-box making it seem completely unconsidered. The centered text and inconsistencies aren't working. Give your content room to breath, add more leading or line-height to your copy. Careful, because stark black text on a white background can be too contrasty and harsh on the eye.