twalker12 / MI-449-SS17-741-js-conditionals-uMDt4P

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Open twalker12 opened 7 years ago

twalker12 commented 7 years ago

Write a short choose-your-own adventure game in JavaScript

@egillespie Can you take a look at this? It's hosted here and meets the following criteria:

egillespie commented 7 years ago

Nice work on this, the code looks good and all the requirements have been met! :shipit:

No need to fix anything, but I do have a tip for future projects. Instead of this:

'What should you do next?' + 'Play in the sand' + ' ' + 'or' + ' ' + 'Run to class'

You can remove all of the ' + ' symbols and make one big string:

'What should you do next? Play in the sand or Run to class'

You did this for small strings, it totally works for long strings too. 😃