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Herron-Morton Oktoberfest Website
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Users should be able to easily understand what the event is and why they should attend #2

Closed tweettypography closed 11 years ago

tweettypography commented 11 years ago

A short description (1-3 paragraphs of text) should be written which can be used as part of the first section of the site to give people a feel for the event. This should be as concise and informative as possible. It will be possible to call out sections of this text with special emphasis as needed.

tweettypography commented 11 years ago

We have some simple text for this now, should we enhance it or is it acceptable as-is?

thepkpnthr commented 11 years ago

Looks good to me! Only 1 change in the final phrase -- change to: "all proceeds go towards the park endowment". Unless it's not for this park, in which case, perhaps we can be more general? ("... the neighborhood endowment", "...the neighborhood development fund", etc)

~Ryan

On Mon, Aug 26, 2013 at 3:32 PM, David Brainer-Banker < notifications@github.com> wrote:

We have some simple text for this now, should we enhance it or is it acceptable as-is?

— Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHubhttps://github.com/tweettypography/oktoberfesthmpf/issues/2#issuecomment-23288503 .