Various points in the text refer to the "promises" of Sec. 2 and Sec. 4, but it is ambiguous exactly what promises are referred to.
This could be a significant redrafting effort, but it might be worth pulling the promises into independent sections so that they can be referred to with more specificity in the rest of the document.
Various points in the text refer to the "promises" of Sec. 2 and Sec. 4, but it is ambiguous exactly what promises are referred to.
This could be a significant redrafting effort, but it might be worth pulling the promises into independent sections so that they can be referred to with more specificity in the rest of the document.