tyllastarr
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4 years ago - Make your characters a little bit more talkative. Maybe the King can say some flavorful things, like "The Princess has been kidnapped, and I don't know what to do! Could you please help me?" That woman on the shop, also, maybe something along the lines of "T-the princess? I-I don't know anything about that!!", and then an inner monologue with something like: "she seems to be hiding something. Should I press her?" That way you make them a bit more human and dampen their interactions Tyll'aToday at 5:11 PM Thanks! I'm not the best at writing dialogue like that so the feedback is a massive help! SGBJaviToday at 5:11 PM Don't worry, there's always a first time for everything