@capitalist Zero rush, but if you get a chance to look at these – any thoughts? Feel free to commit directly to this branch if you want to reword or restore anything.
@capitalist I'm going to go ahead and merge this, mostly because I think it stays true to what you originally wrote. (Kept lots of your original wording.)
Feel free to give feedback / revert things though!
@capitalist Zero rush, but if you get a chance to look at these – any thoughts? Feel free to commit directly to this branch if you want to reword or restore anything.