Closed jrthieke closed 2 years ago
Hi Bakr, First of all, I love the "punny" title. I think the idea for your infographic ties into our Off the Grid story really well. It's amazing to me that a coffee maker uses more energy than a TV. I never would've guessed. The only criticism I have for you is that you could make the appliances a bit more visually stimulating. The background and text colors you chose go together perfectly, but the appliances are all simple and gray. Maybe later when you add the other appliances, it will look a little more colorful. Other than that, you did a great job! :) @bakrmuhammad
Hey Bakr, I like the infographic. While my forte is more story editing, since I’m editing all of the individual stories I’ll throw in my two cents here and you can take it or leave it.
All in all though, nice graphic. Now I don’t feel as bad leaving my TV on constantly (although I probably still should). Hope you continue fleshing this out; I think it’ll look nice in the magazine, especially with your house concept.
Bakr keeps his story in a PDF; edit from there.