Closed jrthieke closed 2 years ago
Hey Sarah, I liked your story a lot. I know Brittany already edited it, but I’m going over all the individual stories as well, and I had some thoughts:
Again, nice story, and just consider some of the changes I suggested. Hope your additional reporting goes well, and I think the story will come together nicely.
Hi James, thanks so much for your comments! Seriously, amazingly helpful. Sorry about the fact error - I reread the interview I had with the person who told me that and realized I totally misread what she wrote to me - would have definitely checked up on it before publication though! Thanks again :)
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