Nitpick: In the spirit of giving proper attribution
change:
Technology is the practice that allows us humans to transform reality. We have been doing it since the very beginning of the human era, and it is really what makes us different from other animals
into something like:
Technology, the practice that allows us humans to transform reality, is something we inherited from our hominid ancestors. We have been utilizing it since then, and it is what truly sets us apart from other animals.
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Nitpick: In the spirit of giving proper attribution
change:
Technology is the practice that allows us humans to transform reality. We have been doing it since the very beginning of the human era, and it is really what makes us different from other animals
into something like:
Technology, the practice that allows us humans to transform reality, is something we inherited from our hominid ancestors. We have been utilizing it since then, and it is what truly sets us apart from other animals.