Majority of suggested changes are typos.
Substantively, I've tried to minimize GS1 mentions. So, for example, cite ISO/IEC 199987 (EPCIS) which is the PAS version of EPCIS (no change to the content). And changed mention of id.gs1.org to id.example.com. I don't want to give the false impression that all GS1 Digital Link URIs should use id.gs1.org - that's definitely not true.
Majority of suggested changes are typos. Substantively, I've tried to minimize GS1 mentions. So, for example, cite ISO/IEC 199987 (EPCIS) which is the PAS version of EPCIS (no change to the content). And changed mention of id.gs1.org to id.example.com. I don't want to give the false impression that all GS1 Digital Link URIs should use id.gs1.org - that's definitely not true.