Address the following feedback for the milestone 2 documentation:
Your personas have much improved. They could be even better, if you made them more multifaceted. Right now what you tell about them is mostly focused on motivating their wish to use the system you plan to implement. But in order for them to be memorable as a character (or person) they have to have character traits other than just what you would want them to say about needing your system-to-be. Think about what you know about those fellow students whom you would consider friends: you do not only know their major, whether they had to buy a lab coat, etc. Instead, you know some of their taste in music, you know for example that they have a particular style of clothes that they like to wear, you know what they like to do on the weekend, whether they are a nature person or a night owl or both, etc. That's what then helps you remember their other traits.
Address the following feedback for the milestone 2 documentation:
Your personas have much improved. They could be even better, if you made them more multifaceted. Right now what you tell about them is mostly focused on motivating their wish to use the system you plan to implement. But in order for them to be memorable as a character (or person) they have to have character traits other than just what you would want them to say about needing your system-to-be. Think about what you know about those fellow students whom you would consider friends: you do not only know their major, whether they had to buy a lab coat, etc. Instead, you know some of their taste in music, you know for example that they have a particular style of clothes that they like to wear, you know what they like to do on the weekend, whether they are a nature person or a night owl or both, etc. That's what then helps you remember their other traits.
Recommended Difficulty: 3 Recommended Urgency: 3