Address the following feedback for the milestone 2 documentation:
In your domain narrative, the first paragraph is project motivation, but not domain narrative. The second paragraph the domain narrative, but that still leaves lots of aspects open. For example, you're talking about feedback, but that concept is much more specific than what you describe. Let's try to improve it: "Items as well as sellers and buyers can receive feedback. Only buyers can author feedback on items, but sellers and buyers can author feedback on their counterpart. A buyer can only author feedback on an item that they have bought. Sellers can only author feedback on buyers with whom they have transacted, not on buyers with whom they never had a transaction. Similarly, buyers can only author feedback on sellers with whom they have transacted and not on sellers with whom they never had a transaction. Etc. etc." The second paragraph is much more in line with what we want from a domain narrative.
Address the following feedback for the milestone 2 documentation:
In your domain narrative, the first paragraph is project motivation, but not domain narrative. The second paragraph the domain narrative, but that still leaves lots of aspects open. For example, you're talking about feedback, but that concept is much more specific than what you describe. Let's try to improve it: "Items as well as sellers and buyers can receive feedback. Only buyers can author feedback on items, but sellers and buyers can author feedback on their counterpart. A buyer can only author feedback on an item that they have bought. Sellers can only author feedback on buyers with whom they have transacted, not on buyers with whom they never had a transaction. Similarly, buyers can only author feedback on sellers with whom they have transacted and not on sellers with whom they never had a transaction. Etc. etc." The second paragraph is much more in line with what we want from a domain narrative.
Recommended Difficulty: 2/5 Recommended Urgency: 2.5/5