Closed raquelromano closed 7 years ago
https://usds.github.io/benefits-enrollment-prototype/08-submit/index.html
@raquelromano on the last point, we need to scrap all the legal language and put in other placeholder language
@annienguyen24 sorry this is kind of an annoying ask but can you reconcile these type changes w the other typo/content revisions you've been tracking here https://github.com/usds/enrollment/issues/245
Yup! will look at these and add them to 245 for Jared to fix. Thanks!
[x] https://usds.github.io/benefits-enrollment-prototype
any way should be 2 words ("No information entered here is retained in anyway.")
[x] https://usds.github.io/benefits-enrollment-prototype/welcome.html
typo: you -> your ("It will go to you local benefit office for review and follow-up.")
[x] https://usds.github.io/benefits-enrollment-prototype/01-basic-info/home-address.html
omit extra "do" ("Check if you do currently do not have stable housing.")
[x] https://usds.github.io/benefits-enrollment-prototype/01-basic-info/confirm-text.html
remove either "to" or "at" ("We’ll only send you important text messages to at...."
[x] https://usds.github.io/benefits-enrollment-prototype/01-basic-info/ssn.html
grammar: suggest "Providing one will help verify..." ("By providing one, it will help verify and move you faster in the application process.")
add period after "This information is kept confidential and secure as required by law"
[x] https://usds.github.io/benefits-enrollment-prototype/03-basic-family/household-members-review.html
grammar: spouse -> them ("Your spouse, if you are a married and live with them."); how about "if you are married and live together"; same with "The other parent of your kids"
[x] https://usds.github.io/benefits-enrollment-prototype/05-citizenship/person6-follow-up.html
remove either "Applying" or "signing up" ("Applying signing up for these programs will not affect your or your family’s immigration status.")