"Introducing NGWOS": Points pop up on the map without much explanation. Could you put something in the figure that says what those points are?
[x] Edit text fade in/out of box
"91 New or Enhanced Gages": it's confusing when the text and figure describe 34 new or reactivated gages. It should be 45. It would also be nice if the text didn't disappear from the box, leaving an empty box as you scroll up. The map figure is also off the bottom of the screen for me.
[x] Fix Numbers in New and Enhanced Gages and Temp
"Specific Conductivity": says 59 in the title, 56 in the text; same with temp (85 vs. 98).
[x] Should we address the grouping of Cameras in with R&D? And for other technologies?
"Cameras": I'd ditch that box, and include the text in the next box on R&D.
[ ] Check with Alison about what she thinks needs to be added
Do you have a plan for the Methods section, or ideas about what needs to go in there?
We had originally discussed a final chapter with links to a bunch of USGS programs, but currently we’re just directly mentioning NGWOS and nodding to the data dissemination programs without naming them. Do we want to try to add in more references to more programs? And do we want to provide links to program/project pages? I'd also note other technologies being test including in sensors for water quantity and quality.
Also - we do introduce NGWOS on the map but this seems to get cut off on certain screen sizes. May be best addressed by resolving image re-sizing issues
TO DO