water use: change wording in ? page to be clearer

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Some initial R code for playing with data processing (maybe some light visualization).

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water use: change wording in ? page to be clearer #679

Closed mhines-usgs closed 3 years ago

mhines-usgs commented 3 years ago

suggestion that seasonal-average daily water withdrawals is clunky, and that we might change it to something like 'maps show daily average water withdrawals for 4 seasons'

also definition for irrigation withdrawals: "Definition for irrigation withdrawals - not mentioning golf courses? Suggest changing "Where does the national water use map get the data" to "what is the source of data presented in the national water use map?"

mhines-usgs commented 3 years ago

I wasn't sure about calling out golf courses specifically here, so didn't include that suggestion. If that is valuable/correct to include and we know that the irrigation category includes it, I can update it. I just wasn't completely sure if that was an assumption or is known to be correct.