There is a bullet in Audit Support which reads:
Ability to support an audit generation process for the information system by providing the information it needs (either by completing an audit generation of its own or by exposing its audit logs to an external process).Ability to support an alternate auditing process in the event that the primary auditing process fails.
1) Suggest that the 2nd sentence could work better as a sub-bullet of the first sentence
2) Also recommend deleting the words "by providing the information it needs" since I believe that is understood.
There is a bullet in Audit Support which reads: Ability to support an audit generation process for the information system by providing the information it needs (either by completing an audit generation of its own or by exposing its audit logs to an external process).Ability to support an alternate auditing process in the event that the primary auditing process fails.
1) Suggest that the 2nd sentence could work better as a sub-bullet of the first sentence 2) Also recommend deleting the words "by providing the information it needs" since I believe that is understood.