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A simple minimalist page to showcase my projoects
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Wording Issue and A Paper 404 #57

Open qiuyuejoy opened 5 months ago

qiuyuejoy commented 5 months ago
  1. "Impreceptible "should be corrected to imperceptible.
  2. “In my research, I investigate applications of technologies embedded in everyday life as passive” =》 investigate how technologies embedded in everyday life that act as passive sources of behavioral / bio data.
  3. "I’m passionate about design and an occasional graphic designer." =》 I’m passionate about design and occasionally work as a graphic designer / becoming an occasional graphic designer.
  4. "For me the sport to play has always been football =》 For me, the sport of choice has always been football.
  5. "Apart from that I'm mostly lazing around, but what really gets me talking is comics and trailing movies, so if you're strong with the Force, I'll know." =》Apart from that, I mostly enjoy relaxing. However/ As an alternative, what really gets me talking are comics and movies, so if you're strong with the Force, I'll know.
qiuyuejoy commented 5 months ago

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