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sxc2 commented 6 years ago

Summary:

Use data science to correlate the increase of ADD/ADHD in children to the rise of digital entertainment in the past decade or two.

General Comments:

I really like the exploration for causes in ADD/ADHD, very impactful
Good section with lots of stats on Youtube

Suggestions:

take out placeholder sections 'yaba, daba, do' and some latin bits
is youtube the only salient factor in your research? what about gaming consoles or instagram, facebook, etc. maybe call out that you're isolating the research to YouTube
if we find a correlation with YouTube (or such), what are some of the consequences or proposals for the future?

sxc2 commented 6 years ago

@MihirSathe1

MihirSathe1 commented 6 years ago

Thanks for the feedback! I further explained why I'll be using Youtube and added some content surrounding consequences if a correlation between that and ADHD is found.

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