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Karl's Comments on 1st Big Idea W201-5 #3

Closed Siilbon closed 6 years ago

Siilbon commented 6 years ago

Summary: Use data from YouTube and clinical diagnoses to determine if there is a meaningful correlation between early exposure to electronic media and the occurrence of attention disorders.

Keep: I like the discussion of possible biases in the data during the "Other Considerations" category. It shows insight that you can present some other possible explanations for the trends that you see.

Cut: I think in the intro it is unnecessary to talk about the range of different devices and media. You're proposing to focus on streaming videos so I think your intro should focus on that too.

Rearrange: I think the order of your thoughts makes sense and has a good flow.

Add: I'd like to hear more about how to determine the age of the person enjoying the media. What if the children are using other family members accounts?

MihirSathe1 commented 6 years ago

Thanks for the feedback. I adjusted the study to make the explanation of different content more relevant and also cut that section down a bit. I removed the portion of the ML Algorithm that was going to try and predict age, it may have been too ambitious of me to initially include!