jmercado14
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6 years ago Hey Kevin,
Thanks for the feedback! I have added a bit and rearranged the first paragraph to better introduce the concept of daily fantasy leagues (and how to win $!). I've also included some of the risks/limitations in the final paragraph (though I tried to end on a high note).
Thanks!
Nice name for the product! Reminds of a game called Pandemonium! =]
From what I read, you are marketing a AI-driven app to an average sports fan (regular Joe w/o the data science skills) interested in winning daily fantasy league.
I like how you presented the odds at winning even for professional players and the amount of analysis one has to do to have a shot at winning. This sets up the proper stage for data science and AI.
I think a bit of introduction to fantasy league would help bring in new users who never played. For example, is the game zero-sum or each player is rewarded by getting things right? How do your users interact with Fandemonium?
I like using the long run % of winning over an average player w/o your product. I am kind of curious how you can make that statement more believable. Also, what are the risks and how Fandemonium compares to professional players.
Overall, i really like the sales pitch! I think it’s brilliant w/o getting into the specifics of how the product works. However, i think if the audience is a data scientist or power user, he/she may want to a more in-depth walkthrough and learn more the inner workings of the product.