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Closed twitthoefft closed 7 years ago

twitthoefft commented 7 years ago

Cool project, Sullivan! In summary, you're looking at the course decisions students make (put together, their course paths) and trying to determine if specific course paths lead to a higher rate of success completing a STEM major. Additionally, you want to study the course demographics to find correlations with course success.

I liked your analysis idea of mapping the courses to find precisely when gender biases begin, based on how the demographics change from the very first semester through to graduation. I think everyone who has done a difficult major knows there are certain "weed out" classes, so better understanding those important milestone classes is important. This analysis technique reminded me of clickstream mapping - how website designers look at the path of users moving through their website in order to find frustration points were users fail to complete a transaction, for example.

I think you may want to decide early on if this analysis should be focused on gender bias specifically, or simply the general deflection away from STEM seen from all students - which, by itself is still a relevant topic. You may end up finding really great data that explains when students move away from a STEM track, but doesn't explain the trend of women in STEM specifically. A gender study could still be a single element of a larger, broader STEM course path study.

You may want to add some data that shows the starting % of women in STEM (pre-enrollment major intention) vs % of women completing majors. It would help your argument to show that the low % of women in STEM is not just due to the initial conditions, but due to attrition losses over the course of 4 years of school.

sfswift commented 7 years ago

Thanks for the feedback Tim! I looked up clickstream mapping - that's super cool, thanks for bring that up. I really like your suggestion at the end - showing starting data v completing data. It would definitely help to have, however I haven't been able to find any public data about intended majors.

I also struggled with the point you made about if the analysis is focused on gender bias or more general. I agree with you, a gender study being a single element of a larger project is would be great. I'm not sure I can reframe and incorporate both into this proposal, so I'll try to shift the focus more on the gender bias portion.