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remove redundant exhortation #319

Closed chaals closed 1 year ago

chaals commented 1 year ago

closes #318

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TzviyaSiegman commented 1 year ago

This sentence highlights the role of individuals shouldering shared responsibility. I don't think it's redundant.

dbooth-boston commented 1 year ago

The last two sentences in section 2 say: "This commitment calls for a workplace where participants at all levels behave according to the rules of the following code. A foundational concept of this code is that we all share responsibility for our work environment.".

@TzviyaSiegman , what part of the sentence that is proposed for removal do you think is adding something important beyond what section 2 wrote?

Also, I note that the sentence proposed for removal is in the wrong place anyway, because it is talking about the code in general. So if it were to be kept, it should be moved to section 2 or perhaps the beginning of section 3, prior to the individual points of the code.