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Audio Description Profile of TTML2
https://w3c.github.io/adpt/
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Typos #4

Closed cconcolato closed 5 years ago

cconcolato commented 5 years ago

The abstract reads:

Audio Description is usually delivered as audio, either pre-recorded or synthesised, but (until now) has not deliverable as accessible text.

I don't understand this sentence. Should 'has' and 'deliverable' be deleted?

cconcolato commented 5 years ago

An additional typo in section 1:

This profiles is intended to support audio description workflows worldwide

should be 'profile' no 's'.

cconcolato commented 5 years ago

In section 8.2, there is a link to "9.7 Profile Signaling" but a) the link is broken and b) the section "Profile Signaling" is number 9.6.

cconcolato commented 5 years ago

I'm not sure I understand the need for section 8.2 or why it has to be this complex but having the term "Profile" with a capital P is a bit confusing. Also there is one mention of "proposed Profile". Should "proposed" be removed?

cconcolato commented 5 years ago

Shouldn't overflow and overflow-visible be prohibited instead of permitted?

nigelmegitt commented 5 years ago

Thanks for the review @cconcolato this should be pretty quick to sort out, as it's all editorial, and I think we may need some bigger restructuring too.