Edit Privacy and Considerations sections

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DID Implementation Guide (Note)

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Edit Privacy and Considerations sections #37

Open clehner opened 2 years ago

clehner commented 2 years ago

Continue editing from #20 and #26, applying minor changes in sections 5 and 6.

Improve case (capitalization) consistency
Fix typos
Reduce use of normative-sounding language
Attempt to improve some wording

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peacekeeper commented 2 years ago

Looks good, thanks for investing time in improving this.

OR13 commented 2 years ago

@TallTed would you mind resolving all change suggestions that have been addressed? or lmk if you feel this is good from your perspective?

TallTed commented 2 years ago

[@OR13] @TallTed would you mind resolving all change suggestions that have been addressed? or lmk if you feel this is good from your perspective?

I have no "resolve" button anywhere. Another downside to applying suggestions externally to the thread where they're suggested, instead of using the "commit" button that's right there for the PR author (and possibly others).

clehner commented 2 years ago

I believe the requested changes have been resolved.