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IMSC Hypothetical Render Model
https://w3c.github.io/imsc-hrm/spec/imsc-hrm.html
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Typos, formatting, and clarity suggestions #28

Closed pes10k closed 2 years ago

pes10k commented 2 years ago

This issue is part of the PING privacy review w3cping/privacy-request#65

While reviewing the spec for the privacy review, I found a couple of non-substantive issues in the text, issues that aren't related to privacy concerns, but would help the reader in following along.

palemieux commented 2 years ago

@pes10k See #33

Re: title case, I tried to make the capitalization of defined terms consistent with their definition. The current trend is to avoid capitalization, lest we end-up with uppercase everywhere, and so some of the more recent terms, including those defined in this document are lowercase.

pes10k commented 2 years ago

I see, understood then. If thats the convention then, then I think #33 addresses the concern. Thanks!