Closed caribouW3 closed 1 year ago
(note, not as i18n review comment)
Draft charter as Markdown seems (for me) to be based on quite old charter template, like HR in coordinate section. I'd propose to align with the newest template.
The HTML version is now ready at https://www.w3.org/2023/07/webperf.html
Is this ready for horizontal review?
The draft charter is not yet ready for horizontal reviews.
Maybe that's changed, but it would be to edit/strike that out if it's changed.
no comment or request from i18n (for updated HTML version)
no comment from APA.
(PING has comments, coming soon)
About section 7, the intent is to say that although all the work and records are accessible to the public, participation to meetings is not public. Should that be phrased differently? public really means public there. For the last point, since it never happens, I'll remove the mention of special request.
Possible amendment to the charter would be to describe "living standard" as either "stay in Candidate Recommentation and upgrade using snapshots" or "Recommendation to be updated with Candidate changes", as the process offers both possibilities.
Overall this looks good. Couple of minor points:
In success criteria, the part about mitigations and residual risk was removed from the template (because of complaints) so should be removed here also.
discretion of the Chairs or the Director.
Drop Director
Possible amendment to the charter would be to describe "living standard" as either "stay in Candidate Recommentation and upgrade using snapshots" or "Recommendation to be updated with Candidate changes", as the process offers both possibilities.
Agree. I think we need a little clarification on this.
About section 7, the intent is to say that although all the work and records are accessible to the public, participation to meetings is not public. Should that be phrased differently? public really means public there. For the last point, since it never happens, I'll remove the mention of special request.
Looking at this further, the webperf charter follows the charter template. So, section 7 of the webperf charter is fine as-is. If it's unclear, we should really push the change into the charter template.
[[ All decisions made by the group should be considered resolved unless and until new information becomes available or unless reopened at the discretion of the Chairs or the Team. ]]
s/the Chairs or the Team/the Chairs./
to follow https://github.com/w3c/charter-drafts/commit/e78c83e1f417baba5e436a68a919a8ba6381513b
[[ Timeline Next meeting: TPAC 2023 (Sevilla) in hybrid mode. ]]
This needs update.
I think I fixed the latest comments. I removed the "living standard" term and used a description instead, and also mentioned Rec with candidate changes.
the latest entry in charter history seems the same with one previous. it should be https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Member/w3c-ac-members/2023JulSep/0027.html
(approved to start the AC review)
minor fixes:
Charter Review
Charter: Web Performance Working Group
Horizontal Reviews: apply the Github label "Horizontal review requested" to request reviews for accessibility (a11y), internationalization (i18n), privacy, and security. Also add a "card" for this issue to the Strategy Funnel.
Communities suggested for outreach:
Known or potential areas of concern:
Where would charter proponents like to see issues raised? (this strategy funnel issue, a different github repo, email, ...) Github issues
Anything else we should think about as we review?
cc @nicjansma @yoavweiss