Closed ashimura closed 3 months ago
Terribly sorry it took very long to update the draft Charter.
I've updated the draft Charter based on your comment, and also some more comments I got offline, e.g., during the Strategy call.
The summary of updates is:
Please see also the detailed diff from the previous version.
I responded to https://github.com/w3c/smartcities-workshop/issues/17 as well.
Overall looks good!
Small typo: s/Smart Citeis /Smart Cities
Thanks a lot, @svgeesus ! I've just fixed the typo.
fixed some more typos based on ispell results too :)
FYI, regarding https://github.com/w3c/smartcities-workshop/issues/17 , the commenter agreed the description within the updated draft Charter was sufficient and the issue has been closed.
APA would like to be listed in liaison groups. The reason that we want to be added, as we wish to add use cases.
@ruoxiran , thanks a lot for your kind offer!
I've added APA WG to the W3C Groups section :)
No specific comments from PING.
We're glad to see: [[ The topics that the Interest Group will address include but are not limited to: [...]
Thanks a lot, @plehegar !
at the discretion of the Chairs or the Director.
APA WG is very happy with this - we were going to ask that we be included as to the Coordination section, specifically to provide use cases (as well as accessibility horizontal review), and I note that you just added this in the latest set of updates to the proposed charter; thanks @ashimura.
Thank YOU, @matatk !
Thanks a lot for your comments, @himorin !
I've updated the draft Charter as follows.
- cepc link has old title as Code of Ethics and Professional Conduct in section 6
fixed as "Code of Conduct".
- link to github repository in section 7 is not updated from template as `[link to GitHub repo]'
This is a proposal for a completely new IG and there is no repository of an existing CG, etc., so I tentatively added the URL of the Smart Cities Workshop repository, which currently includes the draft Charter of the proposed IG, with a note of "LINK To be updated".
- section 8 contains director as
at the discretion of the Chairs or the Director.
fixed it as "at the discretion of the Chairs".
- section 1.3 paragraph 3 and 4 has html error, also paragraph 4 IPA and OPC might need country name?
added missing "</p>" and "</dl>".
Regarding "IPA" and "OPC", I've added their official names in addition to the acronyms.
no comment or request from i18n
@simoneonofri , is there any comment from the Security viewpoint?
Hi @ashimura, I am working on it! :)
Thanks a lot, @simoneonofri !
Hi @ashimura,
In relation to the Charter, for the Security aspect, I would add as a Success Criteria to document a Threat Model for Smart Cities (also modeled after the WoT one), which also includes the various Supply Chain related threats that are typical of IoT devices.
Thanks a lot for your suggestion, @simoneonofri !
As we chatted on IRC:
What do you think?
hi @ashimura thank you. Make sense to me, it is important to document the procedure anche the findings referencing them and which one are considered
Thanks a lot for your comments, @himorin !
I've remove the "TODO" Note about APA WG, because the APA WG has been already added based on the accessibility review result.
Also updated the copyright year to "2024".
Proposed Chairs:
Thanks, @plehegar ! Those proposed Chairs have been added to the draft Charter on the GitHub side. Please see also PR 25
New charter proposal, reviewers please take note.
Charter Review
Draft Charter: Web-based Digital Twins for Smart Cities Interest Group
What kind of charter is this? Check the relevant box / remove irrelevant branches.
Horizontal Reviews: apply the Github label "Horizontal review requested" to request reviews for accessibility (a11y), internationalization (i18n), privacy, and security. Also add a "card" for this issue to the Strategy Funnel.
Communities suggested for outreach:
Known or potential areas of concern:
Where would charter proponents like to see issues raised? (this strategy funnel issue, a different github repo, email, ...)
Anything else we should think about as we review?