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Accessible Media Introduction
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[!!/ED] Edit of first section (see comments and edits) #94

Open shawna-slh opened 7 years ago

shawna-slh commented 7 years ago

Edited bullets to have parallel structure and word order. Tersified and simplified language. Fixed oxford comma.

I suggested "video and audio media" in the first sentence to help tie the title "Accessible Media" to "video and audio"

Deleted "Transcripts are crucial for users who are deaf-blind, or for any user who relies on braille." because that belongs in earlier or later section, not this description bullet.

Consider deleting "Interactive transcripts can be synchronized with the media so that words are highlighted as they are spoken, and users can select words to move to that spot in the video." from this short description. It can be more clearly covered in the specific section.

Overall I guess most of this is editor's discretion, yet highly recommended. :-)