sharronrush
commented
7 years ago Agree with Norah about the intro. Other workflow related issues include:
- Mini personas might be more effective if integrated. If each was placed in context of the problem being addressed to help developers immediately connect the problem to a personal experience.
- Topic info is generally well presented, and examples are good - some wording suggestions offered later in context
- "Related Tips and Techniques" adds unneeded verbiage to the table of contents.
I think the introduction is not necessary and can be removed altogether: "If you’re used to developing in a desktop environment, or on a mobile environment without thinking much about accessibility, you’ve come to the right place to learn about making mobile devices accessible. First, some essential background."