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Clarify 'jargon' #184

Closed iadawn closed 2 years ago

iadawn commented 2 years ago

"Luis is keen to get a job but worries that the jargon will make this initially difficulty". This initial sentence is hitting strange each time I read it. Luis is keen to get a job but worries that industry jargon or workplace jargon or job-related jargon... I feel like jargon needs to be described as what kind of jargon. I also think the end of the sentence should state "difficult at first." because hopefully, he would eventually get used to it and I also think its more plain that way. If simple language is something Luis needs, we should be sure his persona is in plain language too.

There is a reference to "jargon". Should it be tied up with something.. jargon about what, jargon about the company on the web site or ? "Luis is keen to get a job but worries that the jargon will make this initially difficulty. Writing in “plain language” is really helpful. "

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JayneSchurick commented 2 years ago

Fixed issue.

iadawn commented 2 years ago

Fixed by 07867262