Closed iadawn closed 11 months ago
I think it would be good to try to include some of the 'why' in the list as well while keeping it short. I think the proposed new list has a number of problems though:
I would suggest trying to build on the ideas of including some of the 'why' and drawing in some of the new suggestions:
New list in 4th paragraph under Introduction -
To use the digital technology effectively, people with cognitive and learning disabilities often rely on:
[Ed MED] I had similar concerns to @iadawn when i read the initial proposed changes. I do have a couple of comments on the final suggestion:
Suggested updates are:
Bullet 5, removed "distracting" because it is subjective.
Good edit @AndrewArch
New list:
Change list:
To:
Because we want each bullet to clearly explain the “why,” not just the “what.” We also want these bullets to include some of the larger ideas in Making Content Usable for People With Cognitive and Learning Disabilities, principles that will otherwise be absent from this page.
EO’s list does not mention several key areas that need to be addressed, including designs that make errors less likely and processes that do not rely on memory.
EO’s last bullet about “simpler text” is imprecise. What counts as simpler text? Additionally, users who are struggling with comprehension will not be helped if hard-to-understand text is supplemented with hard-to-understand images, graphs, and other illustrations. The emphasis needs to be on ease of understanding.