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[ED-LOW ] Would remove extraneous sentence in Input opener #295

Closed MicheleAWilliams-A11y closed 1 year ago

MicheleAWilliams-A11y commented 1 year ago

The following in the Input opener is hard to follow and doesn't seem to add much value to what the subsequent bulleted list states. I recommend removing:

For instance, some people do not use a mouse, keyboard, or both, while others use specific configurations for keyboard and mouse, or use alternative hardware and software altogether.

JayneSchurick commented 1 year ago

Agreed and changed to:

People use different approaches to enter text and activate commands, for example: ...

JayneSchurick commented 1 year ago

@MicheleAWilliams-A11y PLEASE APPROVE

I removed the sentence, per your recommendation. Now it reads:

People use different approaches to enter text and activate commands, for example:

MicheleAWilliams-A11y commented 1 year ago

Looks good to me - thanks