Summary
This page explores the wide diversity of people and abilities. It highlights some web accessibility barriers that people commonly experience because of inaccessible websites and web tools.
That summary worked when all of the information was on one page. It needs editing now that the information is across multiple pages.
downplay web
current "... some web accessibility barriers..."
-> "... some accessibility barriers..."
fewer modifiers
It highlights some web accessibility barriers that people commonly experience
-> It highlights some accessibility barriers that people experience
or maybe even
-> It highlights accessibility barriers that people experience
-- not sure how important to show that it's not-inclusive -- probably not needed in this sentence since it's in the next. Also, the headings are all "Examples of..."
highlights?
-> It describes accessibility barriers that people experience
or
-> It introduces accessibility barriers that people experience
Diverse Abilities and Barriers:
Maybe just replace "This page" with "This section" like in Tools & Techniques page?
downplay web current "... some web accessibility barriers..." -> "... some accessibility barriers..."
fewer modifiers
-> It highlights some accessibility barriers that people experience
or maybe even
-> It highlights accessibility barriers that people experience
-- not sure how important to show that it's not-inclusive -- probably not needed in this sentence since it's in the next. Also, the headings are all "Examples of..."
-> It describes accessibility barriers that people experience
or
-> It introduces accessibility barriers that people experience
?