Closed AndrewArch closed 3 months ago
URL: https://deploy-preview-113--wai-people-use-web.netlify.app/people-use-web/
Location: Opening italiciced paragraph
Current wording: Or people who have difficulty hearing or understanding, or have other disabilities?
Suggested revision: Or people who have difficulty hearing, or understanding, or have other disabilities?
Rationale: current sentence with only one comma runs 'hearing' and 'understanding' together. Adding an earlier comma separates the two difficulties.
Fixed.
URL: https://deploy-preview-113--wai-people-use-web.netlify.app/people-use-web/
Location: Opening italiciced paragraph
Current wording: Or people who have difficulty hearing or understanding, or have other disabilities?
Suggested revision: Or people who have difficulty hearing, or understanding, or have other disabilities?
Rationale: current sentence with only one comma runs 'hearing' and 'understanding' together. Adding an earlier comma separates the two difficulties.