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Short Videos Explaining WCAG 2 Requirements
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[e] SC 1.3.6 Script - Scene 4 Audio #33

Closed bakkenb closed 3 years ago

bakkenb commented 3 years ago

Strong The first part of this sentence is too ambiguous. It needs to be qualified that it is about what a developer has done correctly.

Current:

When page sections are described, Xeena can use a command in the tool to temporarily hide all parts of the page except the main content, so that he can focus on reading the content.

Suggestion:

When sections of web pages are properly labelled in the code, Xeena can use a command in the tool to temporarily hide all parts of the page except the main content, so that he can focus on reading the content.

nitedog commented 3 years ago

The scene before says:

For this to happen, developers need to provide the correct code to describe the purpose of the buttons, links, and different sections of the page.

I changed these two scenes (3 and 4) to say this:

For this to happen, developers need to provide the correct code to identify the purpose of the buttons, links, and different sections of the page.

When page sections are identified in the code, Xeena can use a command in the tool to temporarily hide all parts of the page except the main content, so that he can focus on reading the content.

Hope this is a workable compromise to reduce repetition and length?