Open a11ycob opened 5 years ago
Paragraph 1: I'd move "(inner ear)" in the second sentence to the first mention of vestibul disorder. Paragraph "How can a website reduce the chances of triggering a vestibular disorder? " - Maybe bullet list the options Paragraph "How can a website reduce the chances of triggering a vestibular disorder? " - I think it should be written in a similar way to the previous paragraph, providing the solution. Examples: (editorial) - no need to bullet the bold face examples
"Choose any of the following solutions..." - add options into bulleted list Choose any of the following solutions:
"Only add non-essential animation to the scrolling interaction in a responsible way" - are there examples of responsible use of "scrolling interaction" for clarity?
Does it make sense to tweak the user persona quote to a tangible example? "Stop that extra movement seems vague"
General Comments
Responding the Chris' question . . .
Does it make sense to tweak the user persona quote to a tangible example? "Stop that extra movement seems vague"
Maybe something like . . .
Persona Quote: "Every time I scroll, content moves at different speeds! You are making me so dizzy I cannot concentrate. Now I have to turn off my computer and go lie down."
Agree with above comments. The use of questions and the phrase "Choose any of the following solutions..." (along with the persona quote) give this SC a different tone than the others.
Instead of: Stop that extra movement! You are making me so dizzy I cannot concentrate. Now I have to turn off my computer and go lie down."
"Flashing images and extra movement makes me so dizzy, I feel sick and I cannot concentrate...
Need to list Benefit: reduces distraction and loss of concentration (only vestibular benefit is listed)
Issues related to SC here