Open nrhsinclair opened 5 years ago
Minor edits only required
Every time I try to access the link for "Accesskeys" in the fourth paragraph, chrome freezes on me and I have to restart the application.
Happening to anyone else?
The only other thing is that I feel some editing could be done to shorten the length of this content without changing any meaning of what is presented. It seems long, but maybe that is because they use a lot of text to explain how speech driven software works.
I think it should be shortened and possibly, some restructure of a couple of paragraphs. It seems a bit long and windy. Some editing required. Some jargon could be removed. Some comments: first paragraph: is it necessary to keep "inappropriate" 3rd paragraph: is "generally work in a single-mode" necessary? Could it be shortened to "Speech Input users generally use a mix of dictation and speech commands." 3rd paragraph: Is it necessary to state "a user might say a bit of dictation, such as", why not "a user might say aloud "..." - is it important to state "dictation" 3rd paragraph: "all encompassing mode" - a bit of jargon 6th paragraph: don't fully understand the example with "y" Benefits: first bullet point is unclear to me with the "firing"
Every time I try to access the link for "Accesskeys" in the fourth paragraph, chrome freezes on me and I have to restart the application.
Happening to anyone else?
No, Brent, it didn't happen to me.
It does seem to include a good bit of background information, more so than most understanding docs (however, the information does provide additional understanding), feels more like an article, not necessarily a bad thing, since it reads easily :)
Propose revising: current: Single-key shortcuts are the exception. suggest: However, single-key shortcuts are problematic.
current: Speech users will be able to turn off single-key shortcuts so they can avoid accidentally firing batches of them at once. suggest: Speech users will be able to turn off single-key shortcuts so they can avoid accidentally executing shortcuts unintentionally.
Accesskeys link did not freeze as Brent described, but did take a few moments to load the linked content.
I expected the underlined terms in the Key Terms section to link to definitions, however they did not.
Post issues and possible suggestions here.