9th tutorial video review

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9th tutorial video review #113

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egekorkan commented 7 months ago

Regarding the temperature payload, we should simply change the HTTP request to HTTP message. We have to however add a simple slide saying with (a bubble) "Let's assume that a temperature sensor has received a request from a dashboard to send its temperature value". In more technical terms, we are just skipping the path the HTTP request had to take since it is not very interesting in this case (no application-relevant data in it)

handealptekin commented 7 months ago

Thumbnail is changed to "OSI Layers and Network Topologies".
Bubble from the dashboard to the temperature sensor is added.
TCP pronunciation is changed. It's faster now.

egekorkan commented 7 months ago

[ ] At second 45, the request from sensor to the dashboard is changing while moving. The lines slightly expand. Is this intended?
[ ] Now that TCP pronunciation is fixed, UDP feels too long. Can you do the same?
[ ] At 5:17, OPC pronunciation is too long.

handealptekin commented 7 months ago

00:45: Lines appearing later was intended. Them expanding was not, it's now fixed.
UDP and OPC pronunciations have been altered and now faster.

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