w3c / xaur

XR Accessibility User Requirements
https://w3c.github.io/xaur/
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User Need 10 seems unclear. #4

Open jasonjgw opened 3 years ago

jasonjgw commented 3 years ago

User Need 10 is unclear, and my attempt at an editorial fix probably made it worse. The requirement for signing of the audio track of a video is clear. However, the reference to "text alternatives or equivalents" is rather vague and confusing. What do the users need? Sign language interpretation of (1) video, and (2) text presented in the XR/immersive environment? The text should be clarified to state whatever we actually intend.

RealJoshue108 commented 3 years ago

@jasonjgw Great. I've edited the user need to be clearer that is relates to 'text, objects and item descriptions':

"User Need 10: A deaf or hard of hearing person, for whom a written language, may not be their first language may have a preference for signing of video for text, objects or item descriptions.

RealJoshue108 commented 3 years ago

I also removed the reference to English as it seems unnecessary.

jasonjgw commented 3 years ago

I would move the comma from after "written language" so that it follows "first language". Otherwise, it's +1 for the clarification.

RealJoshue108 commented 3 years ago

Done. Added to main branch.