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Minor grammatical error in value proposition #21

Open warrencxw opened 2 years ago

warrencxw commented 2 years ago

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"Students can manage their time" would be more accurate as "students" are plural. This would also standardise with the last sentence where the word "they" is used.

nus-pe-bot commented 2 years ago

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Inconsistent third-person pronouns in DG page 25

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Page 25 of the DG reads (emphasis mine)

Students can manage his/her time by adding their tasks into the application and get reminders when the tasks are due for completion.

Within the paragraph shown, his/her is only used once, with their being used to refer to the user in all other cases. Consider remaining consistent and use their in all cases?

[original: nus-cs2113-AY2122S2/pe-interim#925] [original labels: type.DocumentationBug severity.VeryLow]

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