Closed bepitulaz closed 5 years ago
You are using an intricate text at the beginning of the paragraph, "This is".
What is "this" refer to? I also remove the "personal" word, because it creates a tautology thus making the conciseness issue.
You are using an intricate text at the beginning of the paragraph, "This is".
What is "this" refer to? I also remove the "personal" word, because it creates a tautology thus making the conciseness issue.