better copywriting for start message

webuildsg / bot

:thought_balloon: Facebook Messenger bot

https://www.facebook.com/webuildsg

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better copywriting for start message #2

Open sayanee opened 8 years ago

sayanee commented 8 years ago

Hello! Thanks for connecting with us via Messenger. Ask us about "upcoming events"

Edit to include:

what are upcoming events?
what is We Build SG?

kahwee commented 8 years ago

Most apps start with a tutorial of sorts. I think we can start with a better marketing blurb. Is there a one-sentence introduction to We Build SG?

sayanee commented 8 years ago

Is there a one-sentence introduction to We Build SG

exactly that I'm thinking! 👏

How about...

Hello! We Build SG curates the grassroots engineering, design and maker community in Singapore. Ask us about "upcoming events" or "updated repos".

kahwee commented 8 years ago

I would lose the "the" and make "community" plural.

Hello! We Build SG curates grassroots engineering, design and maker communities in Singapore. Ask us about "upcoming events" or "updated repos".

What do you think?

sayanee commented 8 years ago

🚢 :shipit: 🌟

sayanee commented 8 years ago

Where can we change these copywriting? Doesn't seem to be in the code. Can't find in the chat bot config / setting either 😰

kahwee commented 8 years ago

I'll change this. It's not exposed in Facebook's Settings yet, it's a POST request for their API server.

sayanee commented 8 years ago

Uh is the code at https://kw.sg/webuild/bot doing the POST request? You can open source the code as well, then anyone can help to change it - will be faster for you 😄 👌

kahwee commented 8 years ago

The code is actually in this repository. There's no additional code hosted by the server.

kahwee commented 8 years ago

There's a bit of problem with Facebook's API at the moment. It's updated but not reflected in new threads.