Open RyanGlScott opened 5 years ago
Mention IU somewhere in the opening slide! :)
Up front phrases like "allocation of resources" in conjunction and disjunction, not explained.
It would be helpful to include a legend (around slide 14) explaining what the colors represent. You explain this with words, but it's easy for the audience to miss this.
On slide 30, indicate visually which search strategies are new in your work.
skip the first slides with bullet points and go straight to the examples
slide 22: unfair disjunction two shades of green are too close, hard to distinguish picture didn't really show lack of fairness
which kinds of fairness are old and which ones are new? i.e. what is the contribution of this paper?
slide 28/29: expand, go slower. I didn't understand what I guess was the main point... which is how to implement fair search.
slide 30: this slide should come much sooner
3. avoid blank slides
5. start with examples
13. which did you do? what are your contributions?
13. Signposting!
24. Can these be represented more like code?
31. this should be much earlier
32. have a final slide with the takeaways
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