Closed bbdaniels closed 3 years ago
@bbdaniels the last sentence of the first paragraph (dime analytics team) is incomplete. i think it's supposed to be a list item with arianna and florence but that makes that sentence very complex. I think probably best to move to a new paragraph, on its own. or combine in a paragraph with the named individuals, and make the sentence about DIME team its own paragraph.
Also -- if we got rid of the 'feedback' header and just had that as an additional paragraph, would that make this fit all on one page? it would be great if we could stick to a page. and it doesn't seem necessary to separate since in the last paragraph before 'feedback' we are already talking about how we develop this transparently and where people can see source code.
this is great! @kbjarkefur and @luizaandrade please check names, if those are good let's go ahead and merge
Drafted as attached! Please check all the names carefully.
Closes #501
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