"Figure 2" is larger than the "Development" header so it feels like the entire next section is about "Figure 2". Probably just some unfortunate placement, maybe extra space between will help?
Conclusion
"This frequently occurs especially for scenarios in which this type of triage must occur on multiple machines using deployment. Avoiding this problem is important, because I consider myself very passionate about cyber security and stopping criminals from stealing intellectual property - if this project can assist in the investigation of a single criminal, then that is something that I can truly be proud of."
First sentence feels awkward. Maybe just taking out "especially" might make it easier to read.
comma after "important" in second sentence is not necessary
the hyphen after "property" should be a semicolon
last sentence could be restructured to something like "...criminal, then I can be truly proud of what I have made"
" features specified in Figure 3 - if I had more time,"
hyphen should be a semicolon
I personally don't know anything about this field of study but I think that if I did, I would pretty easily be able to comprehend what is going on. Report structure feels natural and flows well. Grammar is overall pretty good, aside from a few things that read a little weird if read out loud. Vocabulary was very intelligent but not to the level to where I'd need a thesaurus. Overall, a solid report.
"Figure 2" is larger than the "Development" header so it feels like the entire next section is about "Figure 2". Probably just some unfortunate placement, maybe extra space between will help?
Conclusion "This frequently occurs especially for scenarios in which this type of triage must occur on multiple machines using deployment. Avoiding this problem is important, because I consider myself very passionate about cyber security and stopping criminals from stealing intellectual property - if this project can assist in the investigation of a single criminal, then that is something that I can truly be proud of."
" features specified in Figure 3 - if I had more time,"