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Feedback / corrections for http://book.productionreadygraphql.com/
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Page 114 "and that that field" should read "and that field" #10

Closed amaurycrickx closed 4 years ago

amaurycrickx commented 4 years ago

and that that field is well protected by our field authorization.

Remove extra "that"

amaurycrickx commented 4 years ago

Consider rephrasing "no one without the scope" to "only clients with the scope" to avoid double negation

amaurycrickx commented 4 years ago

Now, imagine as the schema gets more complex, and as different teams start adding their part of the schema:

I'm not sure commas are at the right place... maybe: Now, as the schema gets more complex and as different teams start adding their part of the schema, here's what could happen:

xuorig commented 4 years ago

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