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May 9 Feedback #19

Open unitof opened 1 month ago

unitof commented 1 month ago

Overall

[x] Feels much cleaner
[x] Loves typography
[x] Parallax feels strong
[x] #20

SRF Capital

Meet

[ ] more creative way to highlight GAS
[ ] Dorian wants separate pages for bios
[ ] Chris & Ron pulled out, Theresa
[x] Does not like h3 blue boxes in general #20

(W)Health+

[x] #21
- Gradient?
- Icons?
[x] #22
- [ ] Bring UN colors into stacking SDGs? Dorian says they are well recognized in the industry.
- [ ] More copy?
  - "When you stack them they reinforce each other."
  - "People tend to do one thing, we do them all."
  - "Instead of silver bullet, we take a silver buckshot approach."
- [x] #23

Community

[ ] Everything else is great, but felt like this still misses the mark.
[ ] Replace photos
- [ ] Business: want something better
- [ ] Housing: looks like choking hazard
- [ ] Edu: focus on higher ed or graduation. Charles: "kids in class, not at recess"
- [ ] General: "What does it look like when people are thriving"
[ ] "Keep the 8 the way we had them"
- [ ] I think in reference to my icons at the bottom? Don't know what was meant by this.
[ ] In our community now, people tend to invest in one thing. We want to show all is interconnected.
[ ] When I pushed on a linear story, Dorian pushed back: "let's take the risk folks will explore." They are going to send people to this in meetings to explain.
[ ] Kept mentioning video
[ ] Inspiration:
- [ ] Zoom book
- [ ] Powers of 10
- [ ] AA Museum has an interactive exhibit where you begin with a quote and zoom out to a story

SRF Impact

AoF

[ ] Wants 3 across. Basically copy https://www.southernreconstructionfund.org/whealth_capital/
[ ] Also says loves the superhero image on https://www.southernreconstructionfund.org/whealth_capital/, which apparently Miguel has.

unitof commented 1 month ago

There are also newer, more fleshed out bios I missed. Will make independent pages make more sense.

https://docs.google.com/file/d/14-UwmIMWed-3ATabwTkpKLk1GqhsZGyb/edit?usp=docslist_api&filetype=msword