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COPY FIXES (and like two line-height fix) #116

Closed mileeco closed 8 years ago

mileeco commented 8 years ago

Did final thorough check of all the copy on the site. Only minor changes. One thing that I mentioned before that I think that got slipped was changing "The Liberty Grand" to "the Liberty Grand" in all the footers. Liberty Grand <- that's the name and even their site has it written like that. I think student profile is the only page that has this changed.

Heads up DON'T follow the copy that's on InVision. They're not updated to the latest cause we've been making a lot of quick changes lately. If you need to ask about copy message me.

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We should add ellipses to all to anticipate: screenshot-staging ysdn2016 com 2016-04-06 20-57-12 screenshot-staging ysdn2016 com 2016-04-06 20-57-16

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Footer change: screenshot-staging ysdn2016 com 2016-04-06 21-10-18

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Emmersonic commented 8 years ago

@mileeco Addressed all of these with the exception of the "...!" addition. I think it's a little weird to mix those both.

mileeco commented 8 years ago

@emmersonic Hmm then I think we should just have it as ellipses. Ending it with exclamation mark to me feels like it's the end, even though it says "almost there"

Emmersonic commented 8 years ago

I read it as excitement. Almost there! but I can do just ellipses.

mileeco commented 8 years ago

@Emmersonic GAHHHH my screenshot not added properly (I swear I thought I checked). Sorry! Just one more:

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this is what I meant by Emily's change, the same screenshot got added twice -_-

Emmersonic commented 8 years ago

@mileeco Fixed!

mileeco commented 8 years ago

@emmersonic thank you you da best!!!!!

mileeco commented 8 years ago

@emmersonic Also noticed that the copy change hasn't been made for home... is that something @iamnbutler needs to change??

Emmersonic commented 8 years ago

@mileeco Haha, nope, I just forgot to save that file. Should be up in a minute.