This paper clearly expresses the author's intention, and uses complete data to demonstrate and provide a complete reference.
But there are the following points I want you to pay attention to:
1, please change a clearer font, because when I click on the paper, this font has a lot of visual shadows, so I can not read smoothly.
In the conclusion, please explain in detail how this survey will help all departments. When I read the conclusion, I didn't know how it should be applied by all departments.
This paper clearly expresses the author's intention, and uses complete data to demonstrate and provide a complete reference. But there are the following points I want you to pay attention to: 1, please change a clearer font, because when I click on the paper, this font has a lot of visual shadows, so I can not read smoothly.
Overall, you've done a great job.